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The City on the Rock

A.J. Cooper

(A Student Contributor)

The magic of the invincible city of Baradon is dying away.  Salan, captain of the Tower Guard, will soon find out that curing its ills is less simple than he thought.
 


Fiction
Fantasy

Salan knew his city was dying.

Its invincible walls crumbled. Its eternal garden was wilting. Its majestic towers no longer rained brimstone on its enemies.

Why? That was the question everyone wanted the answer to. Did the gods scorn its immorality? Salan didn’t think so. The government was self-serving, but the people were good. Every man he knew loved his wife. Every child he knew loved his mother.

So why?

This was the question he pondered as he walked down Calar Street. It was late. He had been working nights as a guard, sometimes until the midnight bell. But it was the least he could do for his city.

He watched the street’s limestone villas as he walked. Most were spacious, multi-story mansions complete with gardens, stables, and grand dining halls. The stone used to build them came from the western mountains, quarried and hauled into the city by oxcart in blocks. Salan lived on this street. He was the captain of the Tower Guard, the invincible knights who guarded the city. The knights who never bled. The rocks against the tempest.

Or so it had been, long ago.

One of his men, a Tower Guard, met him beside his house. It was Ahmed, a dark-skinned man who was second in command. “Hello, lord-captain,” he said with a smile.

“Hello,” Salan said, “What are you doing here?”

“Just heading home to the Tower. What are you doing?”

“Walking to my house. Shouldn’t you be in bed?”

Ahmed smiled. “I was in the park, captain, dealing with some thugs.”

“All right,” Salan said, “I will see you in the morning, then. Good day.”

They parted ways quickly.

He turned into a small house he called his own. It was a bit smaller than the rest, plain and unadorned. It was square in shape, white as snow, with a porch outside supported by intricate columns. A small candle, burning bright, illuminated the window. In the front was a garden his wife tended, growing saffron and spices for cooking.

He opened the cedar door, said, “I’m home!” but there was no answer.

His wife, Darmela, lay sprawled across the expensive silk sheets of their bed. As she lay there quietly, he noticed her soft black hair strewn about her back, scented with oils and perfume. His son, Dala, slept soundly in his room. He knew his son missed him.

He had tried to get him to go on the hunt with him a week ago, but Dala hated physical sports. Dala liked reading books, and studying the stars—two things Salan had no interest in doing. At eight years old, Salan could do few things besides shut him up in a monastery or get him an apprenticeship with a scribe. He would not be the next Tower Captain as he had hoped, and so far Darmela had been unable to bear him another child.

On their cedar table was a shiny pewter plate. On it, a tiny portion of roast mutton and some wine of Northern vintage. Both cold. Darmela had probably cooked it for him at about dusk, hoping he would return.

Salan sat down to eat, picking up his prongs and razor-sharp knife. He cut along the bone and chewed the meat, realizing how hungry he was.  He had been too overworked, too concerned, to be hungry. Physical work often masked his weariness—when he was famished in body or mind, all he had to do was go patrol or search for crime.

The wine filled his mouth with flavor.

“Salan,” Darmela said in her sleep, turning on her side. “Salan! Hold me…”

He drank the rest of his wine sadly and ate the last bits of mutton, wiping his greasy mouth with a striped cotton napkin. He wished he could spend more time with his family. He could, he supposed, but he was too concerned with the fate of Baradon. Darmela often said he was more concerned with the city than his family.

“Gods of the sky, heal my city,” he prayed as he had so often before. But the gods never answered. The city continued in its downward slope, and it seemed they turned a deaf ear.  In days long ago the gods had blessed their city greatly, filling it with wealth from every nation in the world. Its wealth stockpiles grew in such excess that gold became a decorative material rather than a currency. But those days were long gone. The great works of gold were now used to pay their dwindling army, to secure their borders and refurbish the invincible walls that now crumbled.

The wind whispered through the shutters. A light drizzle picked up. Wind blew and shook the stalwart cedars in Salan’s backyard.

Rising, he walked to the kitchen to wash his pewter dish.

He poured water onto it from a silver laver, forming a small pool. Then he looked inside the watery plate. And that was when it struck him.

Two luminous eyes stared into his from the waters. He could see a strange figure in the reflection, frightening him a bit. He looked deeper, taking note of a spacious rocky cave. He pondered what it could be.

“It cannot heal itself!” shrieked Darmela, still sleeping. “Only a sword can heal it, and then only a while!”

“The Pools!” Salan said, “The Nine Pools are defiled!”

Lightning cracked a mile away, ushering in a voluminous rain. It pattered hard on the rooftop.

The nine fonts in the caverns below the city held the city’s magic within like a dam did to a river. If touched or even breathed upon, the magic would leak and gush, dissipating throughout the countryside rather than staying concentrated in one location.

Salan opened the door and took off at a brisk walk. He was not in armor—all he had was a small steel poniard and a cloak—and whatever had defiled the Pools needed to be fought appropriately. He needed to get his equipment.

He grabbed his sword and a chainmail shirt from the Tower, then headed to his destination.

The entryway to the cavern was a well-kept secret. No one but Salan and the High Astrologer knew where it was, and he was ordinarily forbidden to go there. If everyone in the city knew, the sociopaths and disaffected thieves, few as they were, would be inclined to defile its waters. But now he had to go in, for the good of the city. The Astrologer would disapprove, but Salan knew what had to be done.

He walked into the city park—a small quarter-mile square with browning grass, cypress and cedar trees. The rain would undoubtedly do the dry garden good. A small cave was nearby; this he entered quietly. Inside sat a pile of stones four feet high. At once he began picking them up. Some were extremely heavy, but Salan tossed them aside with relative ease. He had long improved his strength, fighting Hamminid caliphs of the southwest and even more terrible, nameless things that came from the whispering desert sands.

When they were gone, he stepped down a small hole into a stone tunnel. This he traveled, winding aimlessly. Water dripped from the ceiling and it felt claustrophobic—very uncomfortable, to say the least, in armor, but he continued.

Eventually he came to a door, old and unused, leading to the chamber. He opened it, afraid of what he might see.

He was right to be afraid.

There, standing in front of him, was some kind of hideous fiend. She had crawled out from a hole in the cave. Her skin was deep purple like a bruise, her eyes blazing fires. She looked like some heathen desert goddess—a thing that Hammidian idolaters worshipped in the dead of night, a thing to whom they sacrificed rams and goats on a bloody altar. She had nine arms ending in clawed hands, thirty breasts, and six legs. Her mouth opened and a handful of centipedes crawled out.

Yet still, Salan found her attractive in the most reprehensible and ignoble way. “Who are you?” he choked, frozen. To his great shame, he felt hesitant to strike her down.

She said nothing. She only stared at him blankly, looking venomous in the darkness.

Salan drew his sword. He noticed the Nine Pools were all murky, dark and defiled.  The Hammidian plunderers might soon have their way.

He charged and severed one of the demon’s nine arms. It fell bleeding to the floor, but the demon-queen did nothing. He chopped again. Another dropped, bleeding.

One more stroke cut her in half.

Out of her flesh came a million centipedes, which quickly devoured her skin and her organs to nothingness. Salan grimaced. They crawled away, finished with their meal, and dropped into the defiled pools to brood.

Salan turned around and walked back the way he had come, shivering. He climbed up the hole and out into the park, where the proud cedars were now wet and the thirst of the browning grasses was slaked. The rain hadn’t yet stopped. As he looked around he saw one of the Tower Guards—one of his servants. It was Kamool, an ebon-skinned foreigner from the Deep South. Years ago he had come to the city, and they adopted him into the Tower service. There was a spear in his hand, an exemplary weapon with a cedar shaft and a broad, leaf-shaped blade.

“What are you doing?” asked Salan.

“Nothing,” said Kamool, his teeth white. “I saw you in the park, so I followed.”

“Why?”

“Is that blood on your sword?” asked the ebon-skinned man.

“You didn’t answer my question.”

“I was resting my bones at the tavern on Green Street,” said Kamool, “You looked concerned, running through the rain.”

Salan nodded slowly. “I’ll see you tomorrow then, eh?”

Kamool nodded and began walking away in the direction of the Guard Tower. Salan eyed him suspiciously.

The cold rain rolled down his cheeks as he walked home.



When he got back to his house, Dala was awake and staring into the night sky. The rain pattered onto his small face as he watched.  He was still in his white bedclothes, the bright fabric contrasting well with his olive skin. He clutched his doll, a fuzzy stuffed lion made of cotton fabric, close to his chest.

“What are you doing?” Salan asked.

Dala seemed concerned, his face somber. He stared intently into the sky. “Looking into the stars.”

“There’s clouds in the sky. You can’t see the stars tonight.”

“But the stars can be seen by the heart—they are always visible to those whose eyes are truly opened.”

“What do you see?”

“Sad signs. The constellations of Harnu and Salaris have receded.”

“What?”

“The third avatar of Kali the Impure has joined with Katala the Sun, all coinciding with a waning crescent.”

“Speak! Speak words that make sense! What is wrong? What ill signs do the stars foretell?”

“A man of high rank has made bad friends,” said Dala.

“Who?”

“That’s all I know,” said Dala.

Salan furled a brow. “How can it be stopped?”

“The stars tell one story,” his son said, “The story of the earth as it would be, had no one listened to the stars’ wisdom.”

“What will happen?”

“I don’t know—and I won’t for a while. I don’t see anything else written in the stars.”

Salan sighed. “Go to bed. You should get some sleep.”

“Are you going to bed?”

“No.” He had to investigate. Corruption in the city would not be tolerated, not as long as Salan was captain of the Tower Guard. He had to investigate, and the first aspect of government—the one with the highest prestige—was his organization, the Guard. He would go interrogate his soldiers.

“Let me stay up with you!” Dala pleaded, eyebrows wrinkled. He squeezed his stuffed lion.

“Shush. You must sleep. I’ll see you in the morning, Dala. I promise. I’ll make breakfast.”

“Really?”

“Yes, but you must go to sleep.”

Dala nodded, opened the door and walked inside as the rain pattered on the rooftop.



Who was this traitor? That was the question burning like fire in Salan’s mind.

Sword in sheath, he walked to the Guard Tower through the cool rain. The cobbled streets were wet and the torches flared in the light wind. It was a cold night. At last he walked up to the cedar double-doors, which were locked and barred with iron. He fiddled with his key ring, found the right one and opened it.

The Tower was circular in shape and built of evenly cut stones and mortar. The floor was made of cedar and there was plentiful space for rooms, closets and other necessities.  On the first floor there was a fireplace and a few square couches lined with linen sheets.

He hung his sopping wet cloak on the rack, turned around and found Kamool sleeping on the couch nearby. Was he in league with demons? Only time would tell.

For a while Salan simply observed him. His mouth was wide open and he was snoring. He was a foreigner, and although this did not make him guilty, it made him more suspicious. Why had he truly followed him to that cave? Could he have known about the demon? Was he planning to betray him?

“Kamool!”

He woke with a start. “What?” He rubbed his eyes. “What, captain?”

“What do you know of demons?”

The foreigner furled a brow. “Hmm?”

“You heard me!”

“They are hideous creatures who live beneath us. They corrupt everything they touch. Hamminids worship them. Some look nearly human. But they all have at least one deformity, and most have many. What else do you want to know?”

“You certainly know a lot about them, Kamool.”

“What are you trying to suggest?”

“You worship them! Admit it!”

“What?” Kamool said, looking incredulous. “That’s preposterous. I would never do such a thing.” He stood up from the couch and gripped the shaft of his long spear. “Why would you suggest this?”

“Why were you really at the cave?”

“I told you! I was by the tavern, and I saw you…”

“Why do you know so much about demons?”

“I’ve studied them, so that I can have an advantage against them. I study my enemies. It’s that simp—”

Suddenly Salan heard a fit of screaming upstairs, and Kamool fell silent.

“What’s that?”

“That’s Ahmed,” said the black man, “He talks in his sleep sometimes.”

“Don’t move a muscle, or I’ll consider it a confession of guilt.”

At Ahmed’s door, he heard the beating of a cowhide drum. The guardsman was singing in a disturbing falsetto. The drumbeat was fast-paced, rhythmic and frightening, and altogether the music was disturbing. The hairs on Salan’s neck stood on end as he listened.

Hana haba dula, sing

Of vile disease the only king

Hasa haba duba, lord

Prince of the dirty, unclean horde



Salan kicked open the door with one thrust of the foot, but Ahmed didn’t seem to take notice.

He continued singing, unbothered, beating the drum wildly. He seemed enveloped in the music, distracted by nothing. Salan drew his sword with a crisp, metallic ring.

How could his friend have done this behind his back? How had Salan never found out? He had never seemed a suspicious person, never a man capable of serving demons by night. But it was true. He had hidden his secret well.

Ahmed held up the shard of a shiny mirror. But the mirror did not show what was behind it; only two luminous eyes set in a black background. It was some kind of enchanted piece of glass, a magic instrument designed to communicate with the underworld.

“Where shall I spill my blood for you, master?” said the Tower Guardsman.

“Severah has been slain by that imbecile Salan,” said a strong though inhuman voice. “He has severed our contact with the city. For fifteen hundred years she climbed, clawing through the rock with her bloodied fingernails, through caverns, through tunnels, through pitch-black darkness and timeless vortexes. And it has all been in vain for her. Luckily I have a backup plan. I will yet destroy this city, this city forged by our enemies, the angels, in time immemorial.”

“What must be done?”

You are my backup plan, Ahmed. When I met you in a dream, I knew your heart was one worthy of service. You will become me. With the mirror-shard, slit your wrist.”

“But…”

“It must be done!” the voice in the mirror said in a spindling vibrato.

Ahmed hesitated, then obeyed and sliced open his veins. Blood poured from the wound, and in a great flash he burst apart. Flesh and blood spat across the room, and in place of him stood a hulking creature like an insect with a steely carapace, pincers, and bug eyes. There was a great wickedness in the creature’s form, a primordial evil. Long had the demon lived in darkness, awaiting a fool like Ahmed to serve him. He glanced in the mirror, smoothing out an antenna with his pincers. He clicked his toothy jaw. “How beautiful you are. And except for one spot on your back, you are invincible. A god.” Suddenly he pivoted on his spindly legs to meet Salan face to face. He gasped, surprised.

The Tower Captain gulped and held out his sword, which shone in the candlelight.

“Do you really think you can defeat me? I am Varthrax, lord of the pits.”

“I do.”

Salan thrust his sword at the fiend, breaking an inch into his hard carapace. When he pulled it out, the tip of his sword was covered in green slime.

The demon tried to snip at Salan with his pincers. He missed by less than an inch, then struck with his other pincer and grabbed Salan by the throat.

Picking him up, he shoved the Tower Captain against the wall hard. Salan lost his breath. “Do not test me,” said Varthrax, “I will spin a web around you, and once mummified I will take you to my pits. I will beat you with sharp whips until, filled with pain, you envy the dead…”

A spear ripped through Varthrax’s chest, and the great insect gasped and clicked his jaws. Kamool stood behind him.

“No!” said the fiend. His bug eyes began to dim and lose their luster.

Kamool pulled the spear out and the demon stumbled back. Salan pitched back his sword, swung, and decapitated the creature with one stroke. Blood stained the ground and the body fell lifelessly with a loud thump. Silence fell over the room, a deathly pall. The demon’s head spoke as it rolled around.

“You have won the battle,” it said loudly, “But you’ve not yet won the war.”

Kamool and Salan looked at each other. They had killed the demon-lord, but would it heal the city? Only time would tell. Salan hoped, and hope was all he needed.



The next morning a rider on a horse rode through the city gates.

“The magic is returning!” he exclaimed with glee, “At about the witching hour, a group of Hamminids crossed the river. They were promptly burnt to ash by a cloud of brimstone and balefire!”

Salan heard similar tidings from the gatekeeper.

“The wall is healing itself!” he said, “The stone is strengthening and recovering its luster!”

The Tower Guards similarly reported that whenever they were cut or bruised their wounds rapidly healed. The magic was returning, and the good days were here again.

That morning Salan purchased some eggs from the market for a few silver moons, fresh from the outlying farms. Then, heading home, he boiled them in a pot for breakfast as he promised and salted them lightly. He, Dala, and Darmela ate happily in the heat of the day.

“When are you going back to work?” said his wife, beautiful in the sun’s warm light, her silken black hair cast about her shoulders. She smiled a beautiful white-toothed smile, her lips red and moist.

“I think I’m going to take a break for a week or so,” the Tower Captain said with a warm and joyful grin, “We’ll spend some time as a family.”




 

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Copyright 2008, A.J. Cooper. All rights reserved.

Andrew James Cooper will soon be twenty, and first began writing when he was eight.  He has lived all over the US and currently lives in the rugged wilds of Northern Michigan, but not for long. You may visit him on the internet at andrewjcooper.wordpress.com, where he loves readers to leave comments.  Or, drop him an email at AJCooperauthor@gmail.com.



Illustration: "Salan versus Varthrax - An unexpected end"
by E.J. Mickels II, Copyright 2008. All rights reserved.


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